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Commented to: 2. STEP 10: Character Profile (parts 4-6) & STEP 12: Draft 3

ASSESSMENT: Word Count: The response meets the word count requirement, with a total of 244 words. Spelling, Punctuation, and Grammar:…

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Commented to: 2. STEP 10: Character Profile (parts 4-6) & STEP 12: Draft 3

Jake, an 18-year-old lad who is quiet but amusing and kind, you’ll find to be the complete opposite of his…

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Commented to: 1. STEP 10: Character Profile (parts 1-3) & STEP 11: Draft 2

The student’s writing demonstrates a strong understanding of the author’s use of literary techniques to convey the theme of guilt…

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Commented to: 1. STEP 10: Character Profile (parts 1-3) & STEP 11: Draft 2

The guilt-ridden twin, a living embodiment of remorse, wrestles with the grim reality that he unwittingly extinguished the life of…

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Commented to: 2. STEP 9: DRAFT 1

“The twin stood at the precipice of truth, his resolve trembling like a fragile flame in the wind. His mind…

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Commented to: 2. STEP 9: DRAFT 1

ASSESSMENT: Word Count: The paragraph meets the word count requirement. Spelling, Punctuation, and Grammar: The paragraph is free of spelling,…

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Commented to: 2. STEP 9: DRAFT 1

Gasping for breath, the surviving twin bolted upright in bed, drenched in cold sweat. His heart pounded against his chest…

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Commented to: 1. STEP 8: SCENE OUTLINE

ASSESSMENT: Word Count: The response meets the word count requirement. Spelling, Punctuation, and Grammar: The response has a few errors…

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Commented to: 1. STEP 8: SCENE OUTLINE

1 Step 1Build complex layouts easilyHi there! Let’s outline your scene together. First, give me a brief description of what…

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Commented to: 11. UNIQUE COMMENT: Why Does The Model Answer Score Well? LANG

ASSESSMENT: Overall, this passage demonstrates strong writing skills and effectively engages the reader through vivid imagery. The use of sensory…

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