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  • sumaya

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    January 30, 2021 at 3:05 pm
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    My Review:

    Criteria 1:

    Excellent – You talked about the six principles in your points

    Criteria 2:

    Good – To be honest you could have wrote a bit more

    Criteria 3;

    Good – You talked about all six principles

    Criteria 4:

    Excellent – Your punctuation is really good

    Criteria 5:

    Good – You could have explained things a bit more

    Overall evaluation/feedback;

    Your manifesto was very good and you made your 10 proclamations very clear and easy to understand however you could have explained much more