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  • Mohamed Daahir

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    January 23, 2021 at 3:25 pm
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    Expert Learners: Expert Learner

    My review:
    Criteria 1:
    Fair
    You only talked about some points from the 6 principles.
    Criteria 2:
    Excellent
    You finished the manifesto and talked about expert learning.
    Criteria 3:
    Good
    You talked about some points from the 6 principles learnt but you missed a few.
    Criteria 4:
    Excellent
    You used punctuation in the correct spaces. You also organised the manifesto well and used correct spelling
    Criteria 5:
    Excellent
    You mentioned that expert learning can be used for anything you are learning.

    Overall, your manifesto was very good, you explained all your points and used a few literary devices.