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Deleted UserDeleted UserNovember 21, 2021 at 11:16 am0 XP0 Perfect Scores0 Logins
Criteria 1: Excellent- You have talked about all six principles and explained them in further detail.
Criteria 2: Excellent – You used lots of keywords in your writing such as fixed mindset and growth mindset.
Criteria 3: Fair- Format could be better; for example, some of your spaces were either too big or missing.
Criteria 4: Excellent- The project is well-organized, well-written and produced, easy to understand, and follows the relevant rules of spelling
Criteria 5: Excellent- Project clearly can be used beyond the scope of this course. Author’s intended use for the project seems able to be accomplished.
Your writing was very good but there were many flaws such as your formatting and I felt like you asked a few too many rhetorical questions. If you fix those, your writing will be flawless. 13/15 👍