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  • Mohamed Ahmed

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    August 8, 2021 at 5:17 pm
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    My review

    Criteria 1:

    Excellent – You have talked about the 6 points correctly and it’s very understandable.

    Criteria 2:

    Excellent – You have written about the topics well and made effective use of the format.

    Criteria 3:

    Excellent – All your proclamations link clearly and accurately to all the principles learnt during the lessons.

    Criteria 4:

    Excellent – You have made the manifesto very well-organized, well-written and very easy to understand and follows the rules of spelling, punctuation and grammar.

    Criteria 5:

    Good – The project could serve your intended use without much modification needed.

    Overall

    The score I would give this work is 14 out of 15 because the work is greatly laid out, very understandable, very accurate and uses all the 6 points available. Also I didn’t give the last mark because I think you could have scored more if you made the reader think with more questions.